Making a budget is very easy if you no the basic procedure and a few principles. B. First, writing down all your income for one month. C. Income, including your paycheck or other checks from Social Security and the government, means all the money you receive. D. Next, figure out all your regular monthly expenses. E. Rent and utilities are important regular expenses; you should also include expenses for food and medicine you take regularly.

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Here is a question that is not as silly as it sound: Have you ever wondered why houses are shaped the way they are? B. Bringing with them many different ideas about how to build a house, settlers from around the world have come to the United States for centuries.

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Many of us today take for granted certain features of a house and forget that someone had to invent them. D. The veranda, a covered porch that wraps around the front of many southern houses is probably an adaptation of overhanging roofs found all over the world. E. In addition to the veranda, the South is known for its cooking and its hospitality. (6) Long ago, home builders responded to hot, humid climates by making the cooling shade of a

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Who was the first rodeo cowgirls? B. While some of the earliest cowgirls were products of the American West, where they learned their skills on a ranch or farm, others came from different backgrounds. C. One had emigrated from Norway, another was a hairdresser from New York, and still another learned to ride horses on a Georgia plantation. D. Attracted by the excitement, glory, and possible financial rewards, this first group of daredevil

Lucille Mulhall and Bertha Kalpernik were two of the first rodeo cowgirls. (6) As a teenager, Mulhall rode and put on a roping exhibition in a public celebration where Teddy Roosevelt was a guest. (7) During a visit to the Mulhall family’s ranch Roosevelt witnessed Lucille’s breathtaking ride on an outlaw horse. (8) Impressed by her skill and daring, Roosevelt later inviting Mulhall to lead the inaugural procession when he took office as p

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Here is a question that is not as silly as it sound: Have you ever wondered why houses are shaped the way they are? B. Bringing with them many different ideas about how to build a house, settlers from around the world have come to the United States for centuries.

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Many of us today take for granted certain features of a house and forget that someone had to invent them. D. The veranda, a covered porch that wraps around the front of many southern houses is probably an adaptation of overhanging roofs found all over the world. E. In addition to the veranda, the South is known for its cooking and its hospitality. (6) Long ago, home builders responded to hot, humid climates by making the cooling shade of a

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